04 November 2010

I'm not finishing this.

I wrote this first stanza yesterday. I don't think I can finish it. I tried to write more yesterday, but nothing would come. And if I tried to write it today, the tone wouldn't fit together at all; I am not feeling the same. Perhaps I'll come back to it at a later date, or perhaps it will stand as an unfinished poem. Either way, I guess I thought it was at the very least worth posting.

It's not much, but I wanted to share it




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Shadow chasing rainbow rider, lighting the dark,
Leaving hopelessness in desolation and finding the spark
That sets the angry woods on fire in an all consuming blaze,
A burning that cleanses and presents a chance for change.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

I like it pretty well. but rainbow rider?